The
Old Songs
(by
Luke Walter A. Ceballos)
Hiding
inside myself,
to
wait and see a different view in my life --
someone
waiting home for me,
maybe
she'll lay her head on my shoulder.
I
know you'll understand,
the
moment you touch me --
maybe
it's you,
maybe
the old songs.
I've
been so alone all my life,
I
guess I wanted something new in my life.
I've
been saving love songs and lullabies,
I'm tired of listening alone.Game:
I wrote this back in college. There is a pattern I used in writing this. Can you identify the pattern? What is it? Please give your answer in the comments section. Thanks.
Phone-a-friend?
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Deletei will post the answer to the game around 9:00 pm.
ReplyDeletehere is the answer. thanks.
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